Matt Bellamy

*Chants* Mods, Mods, Mods! Mmkay. Lyric poetry, too. And Brad's usergroup which has a long title I can't remember. Tis good.

You certainly don't have to be good looking to be attractive, I think. In relationships, I don't think it's important how someone looks, so certainly not in any other circumstances. ...

Meep. :o *packs bags and jumps on plane with Emma*

Are HIM emo?

Heck no! Anyway. Guys in eyeliner are hot. Like the guy from MCR. And some of the music is pretty good.

Is it a boy or a girl? That's important.

"I'm sorry," she muttered. "I don't know what came over me." "it's quite alright," he replied, captivated by her gentle sincerity as she offered him a tissue. "Maybe after I've ...

This seems a little...sloppy. There's no structure, which is fine, as it's free verse, anything goes. It just didn't sound like it flowed in my head. However. The first line ...

Mirror: Some lines are a little longer, some are shorter, so I feel this doesn't flow very well. You say "Her imperfections linger/Before her drop-dead gorgeous frown." So even her ...

I'm picking up on things here that you may or may not have intentionally touched on. Fore example: "Where snow always fell". It always fell, did it? Was the boy ...

Well it's catchy. At the moment it seems little more than an outlet of angst, which I don't begrudge you, I do it often. But if you want to improve ...

Useful website :)

Ooh, I like. You touch on a feeling of unity, and I think you could develop that more-is this a romantic unity? Or am I just in a romantic mood? ...

This left me confused. I didn't find it particularly easy to read, and got confused as to whether you want to talk or you want answers. Or do you want ...

Ditto Snoink, I wasn't sure about that line either, it was kind of hard for me to get my head around. Apart from that, I like this very much. It's ...